10 years ago by
A Pianist
Hello Zack,
Very impressive for one year of study, my hat's off to you!
As for constructive criticism, the main thing is rhythmic stability. Especially in the first piece, you have to feel much more that you are generating a dependable pulse. One way to do that without getting overly mechanical about it is putting the metronone on but slowly, under tempo, and pretending that YOU are making the metronome click by playing the beat note. I write about it in The Craft of Piano Playing...
Good luck!
AFF