10 years ago by
A Pianist
Hi,
Before I comment on the actual playing, I have a concern with your post
Wearing headphones should allow you to hear all the (messy) details.
- The piano was set on super light touch. As a result, there is no margin for error and the (many) notes that are not played will stand out.
rgds
I think the highlighted words are the main problem. What does it mean to play a note "just right"? There are many many different ways to play the notes and every time you play a piece it sounds different.
I think what I hear in your music is that you are trying to play "just right" and as a result the sound is very controlled.
Regarding your playing, I think you need to work on a better sense of pulse and more dynamic variation.
What is the meter of these pieces? When does a phrase start and where does it end? It sounds a bit like somebody speaking at a constant rate without taking a breath to rest, and no pause between sentences.
I find it helps to exaggerate at first. Play the first note of each bar extra loud, and the rest of the notes extra soft. It will probably sound bad, but it will give you an idea of the direction you need to take. Also, watch where slurs start and end, and take a moment to breath between them (exaggerate that too - lift your hand high up from the keys).
To get better phrasing and dynamic ideas, you could try to sing these melodies while tapping the beat with your hand. Usually when we sing we instnctively inflect the rhythm the and the dynamics slighty to match our musical idea. Then try to copy what you hear to the keyboard.
Also, I find that playing at a faster tempo helps to get a better feeling of the pulse and playing becomes more musical as a result. Even if the piece is supposed to be played at a slower tempo eventually, playing it a bit faster helps you develop a musical idea.
As you say, the road is long (and the journey is enjoyabe). On the positive side, it doesn't sound like complete typing to me. When you called yourself a typist I excpected to hear banged notes all over the keyboard, but instead there is a nice flow between one note to the next. Keep working on your legato touch, but with more dynamics, a clear sense of pulse, and slight pauses between phrases.
Zack